Can I have feedback on my GFX,This is my First one
All criticism Appreciated
I’m still fixing the elbow part
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The bear mask really doesn’t match at all.
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That happens when someone deletes there post/reply. Its replaced with that
I have to agree with @Nfairy2, personally I also think you should use blender. It will improve the bends, lighting, etc. YouTube has loads of tutorials and I think you should check them out, best of luck.
Basic Tutorial:
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I did make it in blender.I just exported it from Roblox studio into Blender
I would recommend using a Rig. No offense but the breaks in your character lowers the quality. I think you’re on the right track though and I think sticking to full blender probably is the best option. Remember YouTube is a great cheat sheet.
Thanks for the recommendation!
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Your GFX Design isn’t that great, I suggest you doing is make some type of scenery like for example the sheriff is arresting an Robloxian criminal, and the sheriff have the criminal handcuffed and leaning on the sheriff car, behind an sheriff county. You can build a sheriff county or use a free model. Then you can just import your scenery into blender and just mess around with the lighting. But yet again keep up the work!
Looks awesome keep the good work up!
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I hate to admit it, but in my eyes, it looks awful…
There’s no background, and the shadows that are in between the broken arms make it worse. Like @Nfairy2 mentioned, the Snapchat bear mask looks odd with this outfit.
You could improve it by adding a background, even if it’s simple, if you’re using RS then you could try using Skinned Meshes instead of a normal character, but if you’re using Blender, you should morph the arms (I guess, I’m not a GFX expert.) instead, and please, just remove the face mask.
Overall, it needs a lot of work, but a good first try!
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It looks like an amateur, you could make the articles more beautiful and professional, but if you are a beginner, it is a successful project for you 
mhmm…
It’s ok for a start but definitely needs work.
Like @Nfairy2 said, the bear mask doesn’t really fit.
It needs a background, it needs lighting, and also what’s with the watermarking?
If I were you, I’d put a little social media icon next to a tag in a fancy font, and not have it to where it covers over the whole body, or spread out randomly to where someone could just crop it.
Other than that, it looks neat and I like how you did the arms especially
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