I’ve modeled something other than just trees and rocks for the first time.
I’d like to have you guys’ feedback on my 3D model I made yesterday in Blender.
Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how I can improve it.
Thank you!
Thank you!
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It is brilliant!! I love the way you made it look broken!! Nothing wrong with it at all.
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If I’m being picky I then I would say to make the broken pieces looks more broken. Like giving them destroyed edges stuff like that. Other wise amazing work I have been trying blender lately and I could never do that right now lol 8/10
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I am not going for too much detail as it already took a decent amount of time for trying to have a good topology.
People here have said that it looks good, but from what I can see it’s alright, I’m just not liking the placements of the stone parts that fell off the Greek build consider adding different shapes or possibly rotation to some of them they seem to follow similar designs.
The building itself is fairly dull, in my opinion, less proper colors. That isn’t to say that the building itself is bad only that you haven’t chosen a brighter orange color if I’m not mistaken, they don’t have a very dull color from my understanding. The best way to fix this is is probably to play around with the colors or lighting: consider adding objects that would best match its proper environment, the square looking stone blocks look a little weird and placed in a random area.
You’ve got potential, is this some sort of build to practice your skills on? Regarding it’s a good build as it has its proper shape and structure. 
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It was a 3D model which I made even though it’s not the final product. It’s just a render.
Here’s the final product that I finished yesterday.
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It’s great.
I can’t yet use blender sadly.
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Hi
I think you have done a great job on this. The only thing I would add to break the vertical and horizontal lines a bit is maybe a small part of the triangle roof you see on these structures. I think it will be a good addition to this piece.
Oh… and the rock in front of the stairs leading up to the building seems a little unrealistic. If it was rubble it will work but it is unlikely that they would have build stairs and then stop at the rock. The rock on the right side looks cool though!
i’ve made a greek scene too but yours is better just by looking at the design.
Yours look great but the environment needs improvement. Here’s a few tips.
- Randomised stepping stones [Rotation, scale]
- Rocks and trees facing the same direction should be changed.
- It also requires some lighting improvement.
I hope this helps!
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