Feedback on my interior building

Hey Roblox Devforum!

I’ve been working on a new horror game set in a basement, and I’m at a stage where I’d love to get some feedback from the community.







Thanks for watching my post!

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Looks great!

If horror is the theme then here are some thoughts:

1 - The walls, ceiling and floors are too clean. Take a look at how dirty this basement is:

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2 - The floors need seams and maybe some cracks.

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3 - The ceiling is too plain. Maybe in some places change up the type of ceiling to include structural beams for interest:

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4 - I don’t really see much in the way of ductwork or pipes. They can help add depth:

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5 - Maybe add details like stains on the floors, where things “used” to be:

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The props have a grimy quality to them that the walls and floors lack. I also suggest adding some ambient particle emitters that could have dust falling softly from the ceiling, just barely visible, with high light influence so they’re more visible under the lamps.

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I think the props and the interior (walls and ceilings) should match better, the props have a horror look to them but the ceilings and walls aren’t dirty enough (use decals?), also the floor looks like it’s made of asphalt (the reflections).

This interior building looks EXTREMELY GOOD! ESPECIALLY FOR A HORROR GAME! Great job on this! How long did it take to create? What game will it be used in? You should add some more details and decorations on the ground to make it more realistic.

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