Feedback on my "Island" that I made since I was bored

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Hello! I was bored and decided to make a little “Island”, how did I do and what should I add to make it better? All feedback is appreciated! :slightly_smiling_face:

If you want the place I can share a file with you on Discord for free :smile: (Discord: !ItsMeVIad#4873)

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Here is a photo where I made the sun darker and does not emit so much light :sun_behind_large_cloud:

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Edit:
I have added some more detail and improved the lightning
Night:

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Day:
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  • Good!
  • Good but needs a bit more
  • Meh…

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I feel like you can develope a more of a base for the uh terrain.

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Its good but its needs more foliage, maybe some bushes and shrubs? i’d also have to say i dont think the palm trees really match with the terrain, they are in a more simple low poly style, and it just clashes far too much for me. Maybe get some leaf decals for them?
Also You might wan to change the light setting for the night. I would adjust the Outdoor ambient setting, found at workspace.Lighting.OutdoorAmbient you probably want to set it much closer to Color3.new (0,0,0) or pure black rather than its default grey colour

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Thanks, I will try to do that also thanks for your feedback :smile:

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anytime bro, any problems just ask :smiley:

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The terrain looks great, the trees look good, but it needs more biodiversity.

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I feel like you could add some more interaction if you know what I mean… Otherwise great building!

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This is a decent island however try to decrease the amount of terrain pieces so it doesn’t take over the island. The terrain you made looks good, and the view looks here and there from my point of view. You could even add some of the island inside the water to give the island a bit more realism and not a boring approach.

Try expanding the terrain so it doesn’t look like a circle surrounding island. You should try adding variety of palm trees, however things such as shrubs or other variety of trees could add a lot in terms of variety to your island the open view feels empty a good addition would be placing more islands out in the ocean, I know adding more objects will improve it.

Other than that it’s a fun sort of build so i can see it looks a little under detailed and lacks proper objects.