Feedback on my latest build!

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#1

Recently I decided to get back into building since I have been mostly scripting for the past year.

Here is my first build. I’m pretty happy with it especially since I havn’t built for a while. It’s part of an old mansion and I thought the positioning of it would be on the outskirts of the building with a great view of the surroundings! In this case the surroundings is a baseplate but you can fill it in with your imagination.

The build:

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You can have a better look here:

Any feedback would be very much appreciated! :smiley:

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#2

:ok_hand: I think it’s pretty good. did you make the ray effects using parts or a lighting system?

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#3

I would say its a nice build overall, could use some change here and there. Love the colour of the build, it generally looks great and i would say you dont really have to change anything about it other than maybe adding more detail to the upper part of the wall!

God Bless, have a great rest of your day!

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#4

Looks amazing! Btw how did you make those effects?

#5

For the most part I like the light shadowing, try fixing the material up a little & putting darker shades of color I guarantee it will be a hit :wink:

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#6

Looks pretty good. The materials are plain, the windows look a little basic (you could make it stained glass) and add paintings.

#7

Hey bobling, fancy seeing you here haha! Build looks great!

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#8

Amazing! How did you make that sun ray effects?

#9

He made a part that came from the window and set the material to forcefield then maybe tweaked the transparency. He may have also used some pointlight.

Edit:
I joined the game It looks like he just set the material to Smoothplastic and set transparency to .7 or smthg.

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#10

Im not sure tho. Its all I can tell from the build.

#11

Ok, that makes sense. I can see that working. Thanks

#12

Looks great however kind of empty. You could add some chairs or painting to give your eye more to look at.

#13

Yeah exactly what I did! I also added some simple effects for dust.

#14

No way. What a coincidence! :smiley:

#15

I used parts made to fit the shape of the window and then used the basic roblox particles to make some nice looking dust!

#16

Also for the shadow lighting I lined up the shadows from the roblox sun with the parts to make it look more realistic

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#17

Oh, wow! This looks awesome, nice job!

#18

It looks good, but there is a thing that needs a bit of improvement.

  • The windows could have more detail because they look a bit bland.

Other than that you did a good job.

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#19

pls fix the glitch where u can just yeet your self out of the building

#20

looks empty, the window looks simple, the wall doesnt look too detailed tbh