Please could you fully judge the following commission I just completed & what is need to be changed/added to improve the overall product.
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THEY LOOK SO AMAZING! I like the lightning, the poses, characters, and the grass!
I’d say 1-0.75k robux for the price
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They are amazing 
One problem though you should add a watermark so your hard work cannot be stolen
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Yh, I’ll get that added to the Dev Forum post, I usually send watermarked version before purchase is completed! Otherwise, thank you!
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I’m really impressed with the lighting, you did a good job there. However the environmental design is a little boring and repetitive, try mixing in different types of greenery (trees, flowers etc.). Also maybe add a variety of height for the grass.
Character design is alright, but doesn’t really go well with the everything else (unless that was your goal of making them stand out more). I’d switch up the poses in the third picture since it looks a little weird.
Continue ton excellent travail! (I think that’s how you say it)
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Thanks for the feedback! I’m trying to find an add-on that will create the grass for me, ad I’m not the best at modelling. I’ll be sure to put this into consideration within my next GFXs. Thanks!
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I have just the thing for you!
(Keep in mind that some of the options in this video are not completely free, with one add-on costing about 95 USD)
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The spiky flowers which I forgot the name of don’t really fit in my opinion. The pose on the last picture looks kinda odd as well.
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They look absolutely incredible! Make the watermark a bit darker though.
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Thanks!
I tried to keep the watermark quite light, but I’ll keep it into consideration.
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Alright, I’ll be sure to put that into mind, when completing other GFXs with a similar theme.
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Overall, I think it came out amazing with how detailed the grass and just everything about it has so much detail but with the posing at least, in my opinion, it could be a little bit better because in the first picture one of the arms looks like it has been detached but it’s not really a big deal.
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I really like these but the second one is for sure my favourite. The third one kind of looks funny with them leaning back, so maybe you should bring them up a little more to make it perfect.
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Yep, I agree, I tried to make them seem like their going up a hill, but it didn’t end up the best.
Thanks!
Yep, next time I do a GFX, I’ll be sure to not rush to much with posing and be careful of whether the limbs are detached. Otherwise, thanks!
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