this is the scene:
this is what i made:
I am a beginner still at gfx. 
Not gonna lie, for a beginner this looks good. The only probleme is that the character doesnât have the light effect wich is kinda wierd. And there is no shadows for the objects.
Hm, Iâm not quite sure about the background. Did you use a google image?
its fine, but the roblox character does not fit in with that background, the wardrobe and the room is too large, the lighting doesnât match up, there are no shadows, no sunlight, no fog, and the background needs to be a rendered background that is roblox (unless u are photoshop pro and can make it look real from that).
donât mean to be too harsh, but iâm giving this a 2/10
Yes I did, I could not find any background models. ![]()
maybe you could just search up âroomâ, then âwardrobeâ and put them together? or you could try making it yourself?
Lucy doesnât fit in with the background, try applying the same effects and textures from the background onto the character render and give her shadows.
Also make the glowing light blue, it seems more âNarnia-likeâ.