Feedback On my New Game

Hey developers! I would love some feedback on my new little game that I am releasing today! It’s a small little swordfight game but in the sky on islands. It isn’t the best as I made it in under a day.
(Keep in mind its in Alpha)




Feel free to play the game when its released!
Game link: Skylands (Alpha) - Roblox

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Woah, I like the place! what kind of game is that? :thinking:

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I think it’s very impressive that you built and possibly scripted all of this in under a day. Nice job!

Oh, it looks cool, maybe at a little bit more concept to it though.

There isn’t to much scripting in the game. It’s just a simple sword and bubble chat script.

The game is a small little swordfight game for me and my friends or anyone to paly and hang out in. It’s basically a hangouts game with more gameplay.

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looks great man! Spooky vibe done very well

Thank you very much! It is like that for October and November!

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Everything looks decent and quite repetitive shapes, if your wanting to it move the overall structure of it you should consider adding some props related to the theme your trying to achieve.

I feel like, you could add some things related to the Halloween approach add something that screams that spooky approach such square hay bales, pumpkins, skeleton head up against the base of the tree and more.

Including something in it will have the themes within the actual game you could possibly expand the island since it’s rather small depending on how many players will be able to join. If I were to provide any type of recommendation I’ll try using reference images to get small general ideas to add or find ways to make it stoned out and fit the sort of spooky approach.

However I wouldn’t overcrowd the build with a bunch of objects keep it basic and simple add things that’ll give players a view it’s related to the spooky theme.

Thank you very much! I was planning on adding more shapes and spooky items. Also the game is now released!! Skylands (Alpha) - Roblox