Feedback on my obby

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Hi! I would like to get some feedback on my Roblox Obby. Feel free to criticise it however you want. I believe this is the right place to put it but if not let me know or move it.

https://www.roblox.com/games/2698521871/New-Stages-Super-Obby-2

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I’ve noticed there’s a few issues on the last stage, I’m sorry for that everyone, will get that fixed later. It just means for now the last stage is impossible.

Edit: I’ve just made some edits and it is now possible but I’m going to make it a bit easier.

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I think overall it’s good, like I mentioned to you in game already you shouldn’t use 0 studs, it is messy and makes everything uncentered and annoying. imo, 0.1 is best for buildings.

Secondly, you should use some textures like cartoony blobs or squares or something. I could even make you some for free if you want it’s not too hard.

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Try choosing a different name for your obby. It doesn’t really sound inviting. It’s just like a boring name like “Good Obby” or “Supreme Obby”. But I mean, you might not be able to think of anything, so that’s fine.

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Hi, thanks for leaving your feedback. Yeah I suppose it’s not the best name, I struggle to think of names sadly lol.

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Yeah I will try and remember to turn off 0 studs and I’m sorry the placement of things annoyed you. And secondly yes I would love it if you can make the cartoony blobs/squares for free. I can credit you in the Hub post in the bulletin board.

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I like it, how many hours u make that?

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i’ll suggest you trun of the colider on the players

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On stage four the kill parts are unevenly placed.
Screen Shot 2020-10-11 at 9.14.58 AM
I can’t read!

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i think that last part after the “I” of the text is a ad for her youtube channel

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Yes. It is an advertisement for the channel.

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Oof! I’m not an expert on positioning and size but thanks for the feedback.

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Screen Shot 2020-10-11 at 9.22.28 AM
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This is also very squashed, I recommend you work on the UI or hire someone.

Also my data didn’t save :frowning:

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I don’t know tbh. Studio doesn’t have a feature telling me how many hours I’ve worked on it. I think I’ve worked on it for at least 10 hours.

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I don’t think you read the description of the game. Making data save isn’t a priority for me. Also I can’t really afford to hire someone and the game isn’t in a group so Payouts wouldn’t be easy plus there isn’t anybody playing it unless I play it or make an update.

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Can we have something showing us our stage number? I seem to pass a stage, die, then I’m back at the beginning.

This is very annoying.

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I will state a few problems I have with the game:

  1. It looks very rushed and bland

  2. The obby doesn’t bring anything new to the table, its just same old same old.

  3. You are kind of using other developers in your game to say stuff that they didn’t say, which may not be a big problem but still.

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That’s a good suggestion, if I learn how to use TopBar+ then I’ll put it in the topbar.

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Hmmm I can definitely agree with that. I’m really just a novice developer, I don’t work on it a ton etc. And the developer models I know, I don’t know what else to put there instead as I know I could make my own rig but it would take forever.

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It’s a pretty good game, just fix the last stage by adding something to jump on in between the impossible parts.

You told me to remind you to check when the stage advancer is touched, check if the Humanoid’s Health is greater than 0.

Also your “Premium” gamepass picture was moderated.