Feedback on my open world map

I am currently working on a open world map just for practice, here are some pictures:

P.S: The mountains are free models because i’m obviously practicing.

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Looks Good, Just small improvements.
Scale the trees different sizes, add some rocks and try to add one more different style tree.
that’s my opinion. Good Job!

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In my opinion, it’s very blank and it’s the same thing over and over again. There are too many trees clumped together but then areas where there are no trees and it looks very weird. I think that you should add rocks, grass, bushes, flowers, and more. But good start!

Thank you for your own feedback! I am going to start on a new version of foliage!

This is very plain. You pretty much made the baseplate, which is good and the mountains look good. The foliage needs more though. You basically just made a very simple tree and spammed it around the map. Sometimes, less is more.

Too plain. The Hills look really realistic in terms of size, etc, but only trees isn’t enough.
You should add bushes, occasional buildings, rivers, etc.

custom decoration will probably help you when it happens… I would use brushtool to get multiple designs of trees. I would also try to make it more realistic unless you are not going for that style.

It looks nice… but it is extremely boring, blank, and bland. Maybe make fluctuations in the color fo the grass, and make differences in the trees? and alos add more decorations.

You already have a great start! If I could suggest anything, it would maybe change the colour of the grass/ground a darker shade of green, and maybe add a grass texture to it! But you’re doing fantastic!

This looks good. I would turn on stylized grass and add some tree verity (Brush tool 2.1 is really useful for this). I would do some experimenting with blender and see what trees you can make, focus on quality in the small things and the larger thing will look better.

the theme looks good tho i can only see trees on it

I have updated the game with the new foliage.

Any more feedback?
I would really appreciate it.
Thanks for the feedbacks, I really appreciate it.

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The game looks less blank now, and it has some nostalgic kinda feeling about it. Good job on that, author! :+1:

the map is just copy pasted trees which doesn’t give the “open world” vibe

again, copy pasted rocks and rocks arent supposed to be thrown everywhere, pretty good for practicing tho

This looks better, however it now looks way to cluttered. I would try deleting some of the trees and some of the rocks.

You know what, the simplicity of this style and the atmosphere makes this so charming to me. I don’t know if this is what you were going for specifically, but I love it nonetheless.