So, on my main developer account, I made an Alpha version of a game called Broken Parkour. It’s game design and build is inspired by the loving Getting Over It! It would help if you would visit and give your feedback.
EDIT:Roast all you want about my terrible thumbnails and icons. I already know.
Can’t really join the game.
Always kicks me because i supposedly have an unknown ScreenGui. Could use a few tweaks.
Oh.
That was an experimental anti cheat.
I’ll fix that tommorow.
I understand, I bet it is a nice game.
Also, I just realized there is a typo in the title.
The game is now fixed. You can go play it now.
Dude this game is awesome! I love the part in the beginning with the guis. But did you add any checkpoints? I don’t know cause I couldn’t get that far lol. But if not you should definitely add them.
This game is so fun that i’m going to tell all of my friends about it and have them tell their friends! Great Job Man!
I had my sister join but on her screen it said she was kicked for exploiting.
Way too stressful without checkpoints… also the path could be make more clear, maybe add roadsigns with arrows showing you which way to go?
rbxassetid://376972880 ??? possibly very useful
Honestly I really liked it. The begin cutscene, the different worlds thing, the snowmen throwing snowballs, it’s really well made and clearly effort was put in it, if you ever finish it, I’ll most definitely play!
Overall a really fun experience and I was quite saddened it ended when I reached the end for so far.
I am going to move it to beta, with races, campaigns with difficulties, and more.
If anything I would probably change up the colours a bit, some seem way to bright compared to others.
Wish you goodluck on the game.
I still need to fix that. It’s still buggy.
This is a well made game, I could see the similarities between this and Getting Over It! Although I didn’t get so far, I see that you put a lot of effort into the objects that I jump on to. I have a few suggestions though.
I think the lighting at the bottom should be more brighter and take place on a sunny sky. The lighting right now is a bit flat and it could use some shadows.
There should be checkpoints if people would like a more forgiving experience, like what other people suggested. If there were checkpoints, make sure the bottom is completely filled with spikes so that the player can instantly go back.
My last suggestion is that you could have narrator taunts you for your mistakes, like what we see in Getting Over It. Since there would be no voice-acting, maybe you could just have the death screen taunt you,
You could also add some kind of object that can literally slip you off the platform back to the start. The little, infuriating things that can really fuel the rage.
This game has potential, and I see alot of things can be done to make it better. It’s a nice rage game, but I don’t hold up too well it comes to it hehe.
