Hey DevForum!
Hope you’re having a good day!
I would like you to give your opinion on a portal frame I have made.
It’s for an obby.
Thanks!
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Hello, looks great but what’s the obby theme?
It’s a cartoony kind of obby (like mega fun obby)
Cool, maybe the portal could somehow be changed to be more cartoon-styled
Yeah. Thanks.
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Hi, it seems like a simple yet decent build. However, I’m not sure if you rushed it or didn’t but there a few minor hitches. For example, there a few unaligned parts, and what is with the two lines, (maybe you could move the second line a bit up so it doesn’t interfere with the yellow or add more lines, because it seems a bit off The build would probably look better if it’s more symmetrical. I suggest you add a bit more detail since your going for a cartoony style, e.g bricks or parts around the purple. Also the colours could do a little work, e.g the purple. The top seems a bit of, especially with the pointy parts. Sorry if I’m a being bit harsh, but I’m here to help
You might want to consider these parts circled in red. 
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Hey. I think the portal looks fine so far. But there should be a lot if stuff added. I can see only 4 colours. You can make different shading to each of them to make it cooler and diverse. Also the portal is too big. I suggest you to take a look at portal from EggHunt 2013. 
Alright, thanks for the feedback!
I’ll make some changes!
I recommend adding the name of where it takes you. For instance, my portals look like this
Edit: a great job from @vintagewarm btw
