Feedback on my Portal

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Hello! I’m designing a portal for my game, here are the pictures of it

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It’s slightly inspired by the Stranger Things gate, as you can tell :smiley:. What do you think of it? Anything I can improve?

EDIT: This is the new version that I made today -

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I like it! reminds me somewhat of a nether portal from minecraft

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Woah woah woah woah hey hey (meme)

jokes aside:
THAT LOOKS AWESOME, like the particles and how cool that just looks. 10/10!

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Thank you! I tried other portal colours, but the purple one just worked the best for this. It does look like a nether portal a bit though :yum:

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Thank you so much! I added the beams so it looks like light shining out of it, adds a lot to the feeling of it doesn’t it?

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Looks great, love the beams of purple that are kind of piercing through part of the wall.

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Wow, that’s soo cool man! I love that.

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looks great! :+1:

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yes, it really reminds me of portal in minecraft too

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Thanks! I wanted to give it the look that it’s like spreading and breaking through and the beams went perfectly with that!

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Everything is cool except for the particles, it just looks like purple triangles with a raised transparency, so I would either suggest to remove it or make it cleaner.

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Thanks for your feedback!

Those will be animated slightly so they’re not static ingame, and they’re made using beams, so that it looks like light is shining out of the portal, it adds some more decoration to the portal, so I don’t think I’ll remove them :confused:

But what do you mean by “make it cleaner”?

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