Feedback on my render?

The other day I decided to make a render on C4D and test out Octane a bit, I was wondering what I could add to edit and make it better? I’ve already thought of changing the background but I’m not sure what to add and what to caption it. Feedback would be appreciated on it!


It’s ok. The background is bland. The only real problem I can see is the hat doesn’t cast a shadow on his face.


I like the Mafia-esque style of the render, however, the lighting seems to be a bit off in regards to the colours. I suggest playing around with lighting to create a more suspenseful scene! Otherwise looking cool :smiley:


It’s quite decent but you might need to render it from a different angle and slightly focus on your lighting.

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