Feedback on my Renders

Hi! I’m Zack, and I started using Blender 2 days ago. Already, I feel like I’ve gotten the hang of it, and I want to know how I’m doing. Please leave any feedback/suggestions, thank you!

MY WORK:
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On the second image, there seems to be some random line.

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Don’t criticise this man, he just started 2 days ago! It’s pretty good for almost no experience.

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I really like them, especially if they are your first ones. Keep it up!

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I won’t so i’ll be a good boy and delete my post. He’s just doing his work. I have my personal reasons for my criticise so don’t mind me.

What are you aiming for, @U2IVERT so i can give a feedback

First of all, your work is alright for a first attempt at blender.

But you should maybe place background images with lighting to intense the design and smooth you should change up the posing the ones you showed feature similar, identical looks it won’t hurt including players sitting down on the ground or a chair and interacting with each other.

The only thing I’ll work on is the posing it seems like you inserted a new character with similar posting spots, maybe add something that the player could hold, paper, book, interacting with other players or include a few players in one render playing, socializing, and having fun there’s a lot that you could improve on this.

TL; DR Change the overall (posing) up so they could have their own posing structure and not similar to the ones you already made. However, some issues I see is the posing of the work and lighting.

Haha, yeah these were my first tries. Thank you so much!!

Yes ok, 2 days your work doesn’t have to be great but if you actually take time to learn the program in less than a day you could have really done a lot better.

-Watch this whole playlist don’t skip (So you can progress/know where everything is and make your life easier): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MF1qEhBSfq4&list=PLa1F2ddGya_-UvuAqHAksYnB0qL9yWDO6

-Use a rig for bending the arms and moving body parts (Try making your own after finishing the playlist one I put out.) Video for a premade roblox rig: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EqbTPSK_G-4

After you watch that fundamentals video, experiment with blender and also watch videos on: Composition, Lighting, Texturing, PBR, Uv unwrapping, Simulations, All about nodes, Modeling and so on.

Overall if you want to become better you need a day to learn your program as before and your already about like 90% of the gfx artists because most of them dont know how to use there program and just slather on stock images, poor lighting, free light rooms etc. But with the right mindset you can become great.