Feedback on my school map

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Hi everyone,

These pictures are for a game I’ve been working on for over a year (most of it was design). Any feedback is greatly appreciated! I’m hoping to release an alpha build of the game by the end of this summer.

Hallways

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Cafeteria

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Classrooms

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Main Office

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Gymnasium

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Everything you see is made by me. Including the decals.

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Looks super nice and I like the style of the design. A suggestion I have is to maybe brighten it up a little more, but thats all. Keep up the great work! :smiley:

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floor and walls (bottom of walls) are too dark.

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Is this a horror game? It looks really nice and it gives off a horror aura because of the lighting.

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kind of. More like a adventure with horror aspects

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I agree to an extent. I don’t want the textures to be very noticeable, however i can always lighten the texture

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Why everything is dark? If you don’t want a bright one you can just add spotlight.

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Elaborate? I don’t exactly understand what you are trying to tell me here.

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I think they want it to be brighter? It looks like a horror game map. If so, great job

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Good job, I like it.
There are some small things that you could change and add, some of which being:

  1. There are no lockers anywhere in the school. It would be good to add some in the hallways.
  2. The blackboard in the classroom is too small.
  3. The doors should be about at the end of the classroom, moved a bit to the right for more seats to fit in. 2 or 3 more seats could fit that way. This isn’t something too needed though.
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Man this map makes me really nostalgic, the way everything looks, the glass textures, reminds me of them old rpg maker games. All round really good build

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Looks great, you should think about putting an ac duct in the gym to make it more realistic. My middle school has one, and my high school does to.

Edit: Also water fountains could be a nice addition.

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