I finished and released my second showcase game yesterday with a help of my friend @Tracccck since well, I’m suck at scripting.
https://www.roblox.com/games/7253078454/Just-a-room
Feedback would be great since I’m still kind of new to building.
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epik showcase you have there.
i liked the realism you put in the showcase (whirring sounds, AC, lights etc.). song choice was a perfect fit imo. i felt it really helped enhance the experience.
i’m not a builder, but regardless i do have some things to say.
firstly, this:
marvellous.
the lighting in this game really brings the room and its objects to life. it’s not overly saturated; it’s just got the right amount for me.
i also noticed a little easter egg with the blue-yellow striped key. i assume it would be referring to “the door 2” so yea that was pretty nice. also loved that blue outline on top of the room.
overall, i feel the models were crafted pretty neatly and sound design was very good. it may be a small showcase, but paradoxically, has alot for you to see.
i’m impressed. 8/10.
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The Game Is Very Engaging, I Like How The Lamp Fades, Light Fade, One Thing I Dont Like Is How Dull The Outside Is. 7.5/10
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The outside for now is a placeholder, might do something about it soon I suppose.
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Superb!Please Do To Improve The Authenticity.
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Seem like I have updated this game. Not sure what to add, to be honest, but let say this is the final for now, I guess. Any thoughts?
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beautiful.
also, i noticed a flashing light outside which add to the realism for me. but yea, I really like the scenery outside. very pog. good work with the lighting too.
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Thanks! Sorry if the outside is kind of rushed, I will try my best on my next showcase game.
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