Feedback on my semi-realistic cafe

Hello! I recently took some time and constructed my 1st ever semi-realistic build. Please keep in mind I focus only on the exterior. Any constructive criticism or tips would be greatly appreciated. This was created after a cafe group called Astakó. [PLANTS/ROCKS/SAND/GRASS DO NOT BELONG TO ME!]

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I’m no expert in building, but it looks really nice :+1: There’s quite a good amount of detail in the build that makes it stand out.

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The cafe itself looks good, however the outdoor area should be changed. The stones around it don’t quite match the scenery and they are very repetetive.

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Hi, you did a very good job. It looks very good, but I don’t like the rocks next to it, it would look better without them. Keep it like this . :wink:

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Looks great! Maybe spice it up a bit with some lighting effects.

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I agree with ExistingDragon’s comment about the stones. They feel out of place in the build. Additionally, you’re making use of unique textures for the inside of build, but that’s negatively contrasted by the minimalistic low poly feel of the exterior. I recommend using materials (or textures) other than plastic/smooth plastic for the outside. As for indoor decorations, a tv on the wall from the third picture from the bottom would look nice. I could also see the build benefitting from cuboidal potted plants. Overall, the architecture looks really nice so far. Keep up the good work! :slightly_smiling_face:

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You’ve literally kept this on the bottom of your post but you don’t move your post to that category! :joy:


Anyways, the lighting needs some work, it doesn’t look realistic. Otherwise, it looks decent.

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I really like the design you went for but the scenery doesnt match

Looks decent. Use SurfaceAppearance, and Future Lighting to make this build really stand out.
Some areas could do with a bit more detail but nevermind.

Also, move category to #help-and-feedback:cool-creations .