Hello! Recently I have been working on a showcase for the first time based off of neon district, I was wondering if I could get some feedback but most of the buildings are still empty and/or un decorated on the outside! I was just hoping if anyone had any good ideas I’d love to get some constructive critisicm and I don’t mind if you have an issue with it! Thanks! Heres the link:
https://www.roblox.com/games/4801079603/Urban-Showcase-By-World-Builders-Testing?refPageId=ec9c963f-d0ad-46b2-8ea3-89d07d74bc70
No thumbnail yet sorry, haven’t had chance to make one or get one made.
Your showcase is good in a way. It involves builds and the builds are kinda good, but your only issue is that nothing and I mean nothing seems like it had effort. I’d say try to add more terrain and instead of using 2D logos custom make then. You need to work harder to make a good quality game. Just some advice. 
Thank you for the advice, I agree I haven’t put in as much effort as I’d liked but I was worried it would be terrible thats all. Thank you for the feedback though!
It’s not terrible! It’s just not perfect. Think of it as a watermelon. It’s green on the outside and red on the inside. The outer layer is your game. It’s easy to see around it. The inner layer is you as a person. You have great potential, but you don’t use it. That inner layer is the melon part and it tastes good. Make a game that makes you feel good about what you have done. 
Don’t lose hope, Try to focus on what you can improve. Like next time you could add details to your buildings or making the terrain a bit unique.