Feedback on my showcase

Hi Developers,
Recently ParrotIy and I made a showcase game that we just finished. We would appreciate if you give us feedback. Thank you!
Link: Small Showcase - Roblox

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Amazing! The house looks great! Although, the flowers on the lawn are slanted and the parts are not together. Keep up the great work! :+1:

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The overall showcase looks rather flat if that’s what your trying to accomplish i think it looks good.

Plants should be not the size as the character you should scale them, down a bit so it doesn’t have a lot of height making variety of objects could improve the terrain itself.

The house is alright, but placing ceiling lights if you’re going for a modern look, considering the stair case doesn’t have any type of support holding the stair pieces up, add some support surrounding the area such as a wooden part running through the middle.

At a first glance, you should try expanding or adding materials and different colors. The trees, flowers, and structure look good.

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The flowers seem very “off”. The tree branches arent connecting to the trunk. The house is very basic-- it’s lacking in detail. Everything looks and feels clunky from the ovens to the beds. It feels super squished so I suggest adding a few more rooms.

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