Hello , yesterday i made a shop and i will like to have some feedback and some ways to improve my building skills, thanks.
Here is my Store:
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It looks very nice, it looks something that I would see in a simulator game. Itâs very simple, the only thing that I donât like about it is that the words âswordsâ and âstoreâ donât seem to have the same sizing.
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Aesthetics
I like the fact that you have made the store low poly, and as @bubbleboy112 said, it looks like something you would see in a simulator game, but a few things I would suggest changing is removing the white background behind the text and changing the color of the text to something else.
Overall, wonderful work!
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It looks very plain on my opinion. I also think that the color scheme you used doesnât fit in the store type. I would make it yellow instead of green, but that is an personal opinion.
It looks really good, although I would make the text on the white part a little smaller so that it doesnât reach all the way to the corners.
Overall great work!
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It depends on the style of the game, if you want low poly then this is great! I would rename the store to âSword Storeâ though.
Itâs too simple on the outside, maybe you can improve it by adding a sign on top of the store, add a logo by the âsword storeâ text, and scale the white part behind it smaller.
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Itâs decent and good for a start but maybe make it a bit bigger and make it have better detail.
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Pretty decent, but thereâs a lot to be improved. First off you need to add more detail to the sign itself, a plain white line with text on it isnât going to cut it, you could try different textures on the sign rather than just plain white to make it look nicer. The color of the store doesnât look that great either considering most things donât look good with that shade of green, you need to work on picking colors that make your build look great and right. At the moment it looks very plain in general, if you make these changes your build will turn out great.
Looks pretty good however I think you could try rounding some of the edges and smoothing them out to create a more nicer build
Something that I see a lot in builds are bright windows, I suggest making the windows a less saturated blue.
Colouring scheme is really bland as well the window colour. They seem to not blend in with the environment theyâre in and does not have that âflowingâ effect. Apart from that, good work! Iâd love to see some of your other low-poly buildings.
Make the window reflectance 1, and add textures
It looks fine for a store, but does not say âsword storeâ to me, should have some front windows where you can see in and see stuff in side, as well as maybe more of a brick or wooden style.
It looks good! You should add some lighting into the windows.
You should choose better colors for this build and i love low poly builds 
Good Job!
I definetly agree with Crazy here.
When you think of a âsword storeâ, you sort of get that blacksmith vibe where it looks a little "coarse and rough and irritating " and a little dirty.
Although it does look mighty fine for a regular store. So I think you should keep this store for later use and do some more thinking.
Either or, it looks very good for a store!
(P.S: I hid a little refrence in here)
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I agree with @bubbleboy112. This looks like it would be from a simulator and it looks simple. Iâd suggest adding more detail because it looks kinda bland. But overall a good build.
The model looks great, I like the low poly feel of it. The only problem is the text. Iâm not a huge fan of the cartoony font, and the font size of âswordâ and âstoreâ donât seem to match up. Other than those tiny problems, itâs really good!