https://www.roblox.com/games/9271196054/UPDATE-A-Day-In-the-Woods-Story-Game
I hav made a story game a while back. Feedback appreciated
(2 players needed) still works with 1 player
Seems like you just took the thumbnail off of Google. Which I definitely do not recommend doing. Also, you haven’t updated the game in a month, personally find it quite odd you would ask for feedback after a month of not updating it.
After playing the game, I can see that it’s extremely basic, there’s nothing about it that would make me personally want to play. It also seems like you used many free models, which kinda ruins the point of asking for feedback, if it’s someone else’s work.
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I think the game is good. I like the story and the effort you put into making the game. @Coldshot_Dev is right, it seems like you used free models. For me that is the only thing, but I understand not everyone has the luxury to have a modeler or mapmaker. Once you have your own assets, I think you can release the game!
Good job! 
@Coldshot_Dev has a fair point. Moving on, with my opinions, theres a lot of grammatical errors and what seems like a lack of genuine effort, and I apologize if you did really try your hardest.
I would recommend replacing the freemodels with models of your own and double checking your spelling as there is plenty of them.
The game also seems to break at the basket part, I wasn’t paying attention as I was typing this however everything pretty much just stops.