Feedback on my unfinished build

So, I have been inspired by people like Kaaits and Nezko. These people make amazing, wonderful builds of shrines in Japan. I wanted to try it out and I think it’s going well so far.
I would like feedback on my little showcase. Please remember, it’s not finished. Thanks!

If you would like to contact me on Discord, my tag is Lit.#8793

Game link:

Sorry for no pictures, I would rather you experience it as opposed to just looking at photos.

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Hey! It was nice meeting you and some other people ingame. :wink:

There is room for improvement in your game:

A lot of empty space here. Add some plants or animals?

Kind of nitpicky but:

it sticking out, not that big of a deal though, lol.

Weird texture glitch here. It’s at spawn, might want to fix that.

Add some (japaneese?) letters here, it’ll fit in well!

Overall, this is a cool build! Nice work!

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Thanks for all of the good critiques!

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Very cozy to be with other players in this place

I like the lighting in the place, feels warm with the surrounding scene. The tile walkway is nice as well. The shrine is goods, I think that’s the main attraction.

I saw some broken unions like the chopped stones with the characters. For small fixes, the torii gate stands are popping out from back and that peice on top of the shrine.

When you progess, you should look back at your assets, to see what you can add to them. I think that you should use textures for the tiles, the current tiles still look nice. Blender will be helpful for objects that are usually difficult to build in studio.

Overall, in this condition, this is very nice.

Before I add more, I just wanna ask if there will be an interior?

わたしは 浸透が 好きです。 ( ̄︶ ̄):arrow_upper_right:

There will be a slight interior, I’m going to do a lantern with engraving (Something like this Japan, Kyoto Interior Of Shinto Shrine Photograph by Jaynes Gallery - Pixels)
Thanks for all of the great feedback!

To respond to your Japanese, 私も<3.

Looks realistic, love it! Good job! :clap:

Thanks a ton!
Got any critique? Positive or Negative, any type is welcomed and will be used :slight_smile:

I need to clean up my Roblox posted builds there is some embarrassingly old stuff on there 0~0

No, I really have not checked the game out, I only looked at screenshots in replies.

Ah ok,
No worries! I should have included photos but i’d rather people experience the whole vibe of the build :stuck_out_tongue:

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A shinto shrine is for safekeeping sacred objects. Those lamps would be nice, something I want to protect.

Another item can be a gohei, the purpose to cleanse sacred place or rid of negative energy. Serves as great respect in the shrine.
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I think it’s all I say.

Good luck my friend !

Ok I will include that for sure!! Thanks for all of the tips!

Nice job ! I really love it ! Continue like this ;))

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Ok thanks for the praise! Got any feedback?

Looking good so far, I recommend adding some fitting music aswell as making the lights a little less bright. Maybe try and add some surrounding area to explore/props to fill in the map a bit more aswell :smiley:, I know it’s still a work in progress so I hope to see the end result soon!

Thanks for all of the great critiques!