Feedback On My Upcoming Game (THE GAME IS PRIVATE RIGHT NOW)

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#1

I’m currently working on my first game called “Jack’s Unlucky Day” which is an ending based game inspired by “ROBLOX NPCs are becoming smart!”, “Late To School” and “get a snack at 4 am”. The game is currently in its alpha stages and I’m looking for feedback. (The game is currently private)

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#2

Im stuck at the play screen. I cannot press the button

#3

I found out why you cant press the button. I’m currently trying to fix it.

#4

The game looks really good and classic, it would be nice to move around a bit faster with like a sprint system.

I do have some suggestions;

  • Skin System
  • Tutorial ( i was confused about how to play at first)
  • More props in the map (buildings, trees, roads, etc)
  • More way to die
  • Multiples Spawns Location (instead of spawning in the same place over everytime)

I feel like the trees could be spread out into the map instead of in a straight line and I also think the buildings could use some major improvements, like adding windows around it instead of there just being one.

Overall, I think the game is good, but could definitely get better using some of these suggestions.

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#5

So i actually did like the game alot! the exploding person was really funny (probably my favorite ending haha) but i have some suggestions!

  • you should probably learn tweening. the gui is pretty rough and tweening would help alot

  • consider adding a retry button and/or make it kick you when you an ending

  • dialog. unless im missing something there is no dialog or anything, which makes it pretty confusing

  • and sound. it will upgrade your game 10000%

i know this is your first game and these might be hard to implement, but your overall game will benefit from it, i promise.
those are just some things that i would add into my game (im making a gasa4 ending styled game too!), but overall im really excited for new updates and i’d love to see where this goes. the game is doing great!

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