Hello my developer mates!
This is the very first game i ever made since i starter learning scripting i made it all alone it took me over 7 months to learn and make at the same time
hope you guys join and check it out and give me any feedback / ideas / advices
Thanks !
And u could do me a favour and like or favourite the game if you like it ^^
https://www.roblox.com/games/9107946567/SOON-Warriors-Army-Simulator
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I can give you some quick feedback.
Let’s start with what I liked. The attack animations of the warriors looked nice. The builds are good and I know where I am supposed to go because of the arrows and paths.
Now, what can be improved?
First off, tutorial is spelled wrong.
Secondly, I have three things about this screenshot.
Firstly, everyone is spelled wrong, and adding to it I believe saying, “When all of your warriors have died,” would make a bit more grammatical sense. The second feedback on this screenshot I have is, add a back arrow. People might go fast and want to go back. Third thing I have is the gui is very pixelated on the edges. I can see where it was cut out of and a bit of a green border.
Third section of feedback is more grammar.
Fourth bit of feedback is grammar yet again.
Looks like you wanted to have an exclamation point, but your mind wanted a comma as well. There seems to be a lot of these grammar mistakes. I’m not sure how much grammar you know, but I think you can find a lot more if you look.
Here too.
Fifth thing is the shop doesn’t match the stuff around it very well.
The shop look very detailed compared to the low poly models next to it.
This was as far as I played. Game looks good, mainly just grammar and spelling mistakes.
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Thank you so much for the feedback, Uh yes u’re kinda of right i don’t have that really good grammar since english is like my forth language i’ll make sure to fix all that
thank you so much for the help i really appreciate you!
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Fourth language?!? Holy crap! I barely even know a second one!
Yea lol , Arabic , French , Amazigh ,i speak all these perfectly since we study all these on primary school and the english i’m trying to prove it myself
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For me, some of the text ends up behind the image.
I had no idea where I was supposed to go after claiming a castle at the start, so maybe a little arrow to show where the enemies are. I did find it afterwards though.
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Hey, thx for the feedback I’ll definitely make arrows to a random enemy thx !
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Besides the grammar and spelling mistakes, this is a pretty good game, love the UI theme.
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Thanks so much for the support !!
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pretty good game! The GUI is great although I would suggest you to possibly use scale in the GUI to make it scale better with the device
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Thankss for the support
Pretty much all uis have scale but i may forgot about the tutorial bc it was the last ui i added ui I’ll check it out
Can you tell me please which ui wasn’t showing properly ?
your gui freaks out when the game first loads up. the intro then GUI freaks out then start menu.
spelled tutorial wrong.
I broke the tutorial by going too far and stuck in it and you cant reset.
I didn’t feel like reading the tutorial it. Then when I want to read it. It’s gone forever.
I didn’t know I had a starter sword it’ll I bought another one.
I think the game would be better if players had a sword too.
i had no idea what your caste does.
tree trunks take too long to cut down.
the first stage takes too long. I got bored after 10 mins. 20,000 points is too much
the wooden sword should be the starter sword. The starter sword takes too long.
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Hello , thx for the feedback
Could you please explain to me what do you mean by " Freaks out "
- The Castle you can upgrade it by wood and stone and gems, First level u need only 200 wood, There’s many castle upgrades each one gives u special reward and most of the times u get more warrior
- The game isn’t really hard bc when you do ur first castle upgrade u get a second warrior which will help u a lot
- There’s no need for starter sword bc at first the warriors do 2 Dmg which is good enough
- Thx for finding the tutorial bug I’ll fix it really soon
its a great game much better then my first game which was a bunch of free models im also not a coder so I can’t really make many games but the ui is nice I like the loading screen and the game idea is pretty good
a few things though at the end of the tutorial I clicked the arrow on the side and then the play button went away maybe make the arrow disappear when you get to the end
the rewards chest doesn’t work
not sure which trees are decoration and which are breakable
a few spelling errors
also the build style and ui are not consistent
but anyway its a very good game
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Thx a lot for the feedback
i appreciateyour support !
i’l working on a whole new tutorial since there’s many problems with this one and i don’t like the idea of it
u’re on the group and the reward chest didn’t work ?
bc the first reward chest is for group members and there’s another one for everyone at the third area
oh ok I didn’t know it was a group chest you should maybe label it
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