Feedback on my "White Dwarf Fairy"

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Hello Developers, im making some fantastic creatures. :dragon: (for a personal project)
I think that i messed a bit with this creature, but i need your opinion. :point_down:
Looks cool or looks bad? :thinking: (if bad say why)

Here is the fairy that i made (NOTE: I made it in a simple style, i make creatures with this style everytime.)

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I would change up the chest and torso part, instead of just a ball. Unless the characters in game are all like this. So far it looks good.

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This looks like it’s intended for VR. Is it?
Also it looks good.

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The fairy looks nice. Besides the fact that its body is big in the middle. It looks weird. I love the no limb style though! I’ll love to see more of that!

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Thanks! :heart: The torso is a ball because it represents a white dwarf star

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Awesome. Maybe you could add particle effect to the wand.

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I wish getting a VR first :laughing: , but in a future, yes

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It has, they are very small, if you see closer to the wand…

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I make creatures with that style almost everyday :grin:

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Kinda looks like baymax from big hero six but I think this is pretty cool!:smiley:

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Very cute! Add some particle effects to the staff and maybe wings to really amp up the fairy vibe

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