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Hi there! Just made an Octopi Pirate from a reference my friend made.

Time took: 35 minutes
Built in studio

CANNON AND PIRATE LOGO ARE NOT MINE!!!

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All feedback appreciated!

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Pretty good, I would add some more detail though, it looks a bit bland. Overall good though!

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Is really good

You made ALL on studio? (Asking that because of the Head)

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The hat looks weird and the the cannon ball fire is weird too.

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Make sure to double check, they said it isn’t theirs.

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Make sure to double check, I said cannon ball FIRE.

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Hey!!

It looks great! Maybe add a mouth and make the cannonball that’s in his arm closer to the end of the octopuses tentacle :grinning:

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Isn’t that part of the cannon though??

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The fire on the cannon ball… NOT THE CANNON.

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looks too like you know, flat, and looks like a floppy octupus. its too blocky, and the hat is placed and modelled wrong. the cannon model has to be fixed too, and all in all very bland.

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Thanks! And yes, all made in studio.

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Thanks! Hehe, I have trouble trying to make the mouth.

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Thanks, I’m going to fix all of it. I was going for blocky, too. I’ll try my best making it smooth. It’s hard in studio with all the rotating evenly. I tried making the hat look like it’s tilted lol

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I wasn’t sure one what to make for that. Thanks though!