I have created a fan-made HQ based off of the rbreach staff of the game on Roblox, rbreach. I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it, some things that I can improve. (Build-wise)
Link to game: rbreach The Team | [HQ] - Roblox
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Hello! Could you supply images along with the link, please?
Edit: thanks!
Edit 2 (And actual feedback): Looks neat! I’d suggest maybe employing a better texture for the ceiling and floors, and since you’re adding details like fire hydrants maybe adding fire sprinklers to the ceiling to add more detail there.
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Looks great! I don’t know if it’s supposed to be like that, but the lighting looks a little bland. Try to spice that up a bit.
Also, the windows in the room in the last picture have some border issues because of the transparency. You can union those blocks together to fix that. I have attached a picture so you see what I’m talking about. 
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I am not an expert at lighting, though I will try to get someone to maybe help with it.
Hi! You have done a great job on capturing the atmosphere of an office environment! A little tip to improve is to try and line up the corners of walls/etc. so that they appear more seamless. See my screenshot for what I mean:
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Looks really good. How long did it take to make?
I would say maybe around 2-3 days, it’s pretty basic and I had some help from others.
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That’s really good for just three days. Building something like that would take me at least a week. How much did you do in a day?
Awesome dude, that’s really great.
I would suggest getting into 3D Modeling. I noticed those chairs were placed around the office, try making chairs in blender.
I spent a lot of hours each day working on it, I would say about 4-5.
I noticed for every rotated brick they dont exactly… snap.
I’d fix them up with using some plugins to make your life easier:
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Archimedes will generate the arch for you with snapped edges- though I dont personally use it when i need a radius for my circles to be exact studs.
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Alternatively, if you wanted to, you could use the select edge feature on SBS.
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For generating circles with exact stud radii and customizing easily the number of sides I personally just use this plugin I found and havent had issues with.
There are a bunch of other methods for rotated bricks snapping, but those to me might be the most beginner friendly I can think of. Resize Align can be a persons best friend in these cases as well.
Also, please make sure to leave snap increments at something- never put them at 0 to build things.
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Wow, that’s impressive. My game includes a lot of roads that turn, and the plugins I use don’t seem to work properly so I usually end up rage quitting Studio after an hour or two.
Overall, this office looks really good! My advice would be to perhaps adjust the lighting.They look a bit bland, if not dark in the build. Additionally, the can and sign at the bottom left of the 2nd image is kind of giving me a different vibe. Perhaps you could create a tack for the sign, and have the can be filled with some objects. Regardless, it’s a good build.
(This is the can and sign I’m referring to)
Looks good!
Just one thing, make your decals invisible so you cant see the actual part behind it which makes it look more ‘flat’
I liked your office build but I noticed quite a few things that could be improved here’s what I found.
Maybe union this part so it doesn’t show all the lines.
The door handle look’s a bit too far out of the door
Also with the door handle maybe you could go with more of a flat design like this.
this door handle isn’t positioned correctly on one side of the door.
Also, I know a lot of people have already said this but the walls don’t line up too well but this is an easy fix.
In this office room, a little bit of grass is showing.
The dirt look’s a little bit too high maybe lower it so it makes a little more sense.
Maybe add a few crumpled pieces of paper to this bin or something, at the moment it looks a little bare so it would make it look a little better if you added something to the bin.
The neon lighting look’s a little too bright so maybe make the color grayer or lower the size of the part to decrease the brightness.
Anyway, other than these few errors I found, the office looks really good I can’t wait to see more builds from you.
Hello There. I am going to tell you positive and negative things about your map.
~Exterior~
I think you did a pretty good job in exterior.
Positive
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Trees look nice.
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I like how the cars just move but I think they should be a little slower.
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I liked the rocks at the entrance.
Negative
- Cars look kinda odd because of their colors.
~Interior~
I think you should improve the interior of the map.
Positive
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It seems like the map is planned really well.
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I like how you pose the minifigures.
Negative
- It looks like you used some free models
- The door seems like going to the garden
Thank you so much for reading. Good luck on your project 
The floor needs help.
It looks generic and repetitive, by no means bad but its just overused.
Diversify the floor for every room. Try not to over do it.
Your map is really good like all, the details you added in the map.
My Suggestions
1.The map looks really good outside. Of the place you should add more details to fill it up a bit more, you should add different styles of trees instead of copying! and pasting them you could add some bushes and some rocks and mountains and you should add some branches to the trees…
2.You should scale, the road a bit more to line up with the sidewalk as seen below. There is a open piece that shows the grass part also! one of the trash cans are of the ground a bit and you should scale, the paper in the can as you can see. The paper is showing through the can…
3.And by the office corner there seems. To be a opening through the office i would suggest you scale the parts to connect to the building, also you should add some lights in the front of the building and also add some to the garage part.
You really done, a great job hope to see more of your work very soon. Keep up the good work!!