I made this for my portfolio with my free time:
I’m kinda a noob at GFX so it might not be so good. Let me know your thoughts in the replies!
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I think it’s pretty good for your first graphic. I’d recommend adding more detail such as shading to the avatar. Moreover, you may want to add a shadow on the floor so he doesn’t look like he’s floating! If you have extra time, you could always make a background as well.
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That’s honestly good, it’s very rare to make something like this in Blender.
I’ve even tried looking up tutorials on how to make a 2D effect like this, but found nothing.
With more practice, it can improve if you ask me.
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It looks simple, but I think you should work on the graphics, and import skins. Good work!
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It looks good! My suggestion is that for the text maybe change the font. Overall, good work! 
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It’s simple. The text and the background do not look good. I suggest adding another background like a sky or a building.
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Thanks everyone for the feedback!
@orangewarrior78 I actually didn’t use blender, I drew this on gravit designer.
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I just updated it a little bit.
I appreciate anyone that can draw. I am not gifted in drawing, although I wish I was because drawing is a great hobby to have. You cannot have a drawing without any feed back though.
Feedback.
Weird elbow here. I would suggest making it more “realistic”. Look at images of people running and watch how their arms move.
This uses way too much shading. You do not need this much here or on the other hand.
The sword should continue behind the mask. You shouldn’t stop and start the sword only on the outsides. I would suggest adding a layer behind the character and draw in the full sword.
I have heard that drawing hands is pretty difficult, but I would suggest searching on YouTube for tutorials on “realistic” hands.
The hair is way too blocky and you can tell that this is not normal.
This foot looks weird. It has a couple of pointy spots around the bottom of the shoe. I would suggest looking into this.
Everything stated in this post is based upon my opinion and first looks. Please, do not take anything in this post to heart. You should not feel discouraged, but instead feel the power to make your drawings better. These are merely just suggestions. I am not asking you to do whatever I say.
For this being your first ‘GFX’, I would like to congratulate you. Please note, this is not GFX. This is 2D art. I would suggest changing your title to 'Feedback On One of First 2D Art".
Sincerely,
FallinqSnowFlake 
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