So I’m trying to make some plants for my game and I came up with this as one of them. I feel like there’s something off about it so I need a bit of help figuring out what’s wrong with it. I might add more leaves because I feel that might help.
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This plant is quite tall & nothing like I’ve seen, I agree that you should add more leaves though because it looks quite sad with the few leaves it has
It was supposed to be short in game, I think my screenshots were a bit inaccurate. This is probably a better example.
Ahokay, it looks like a plant thats dying (sorry) so I suggest adding leaves? Perhaps it’d look better in a pot. Hope this helps
I might just try remaking it because I feel the size inconsistency might have been part of the problem. Thank for the tips though.
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You should add more leaves, looks a bit tall too.
I think the real issue is that the stalk seems far too thick for a tree with shoots that small. It needs to be thick near the base and then taper off to a point at the top. It currently has relatively the same thickness for 90% of its height. That should make it look more natural. Yea more leaves, but also the thicker and longer the shoots, the more off shoots that shoot should have. 
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Ok so I made an improved version:
I decided to make it look more stylized, and instead of making to stalk thinner I decorated it at the top so it looked more natural. I think it looks pretty good right now, but I will improve it if it needs any.
Also I’m not trying to make it a certain species of plant, I just wanted to make a plant that looked nice. So it probably looks really scientifically inaccurate lol.
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That is an improvement from the first, the proportions are looking more realistic.
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Thank you! I’m glad you think it’s an improvement, it looks good in game too.