i want you to give me critiques and feedbacks to this render:
This render doesn’t really remind me of an ice cream factory. Also, add shadows and more stuff on the background.
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Render looks great! Maybe change the font of the text to a cartoony style. You can find different type of fonts here 
. The lighting is decent, its a bit too bright in my opinion. Also maybe show a render of the ice cream factory rather than a man walking. Or you could make him hold an ice cream on front of the factory. Nonetheless, keep up the good work.
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I recommend changing some of your render settings to make this look more realistic, also yes, I am not reminded of an ice cream factory in this. Good work otherwise.
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I think the general render looks good, but I do not see how this has to do with ice cream. I would relate the render to the game a bit more. Also, I would add a bit more dimension. I think it would look awesome with shadows and a sun flare. Another suggestion is to make sure the text stands out. I would change the color of the stroke for the text and add a drop shadow. Otherwise, nice work!
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Haha ikr it kinda doesn’t seem like an ice cream factory, just started making gfxs
I would suggest adding some shadows or something to give it a more realistic feel to it. I would also suggest adding something in the background as it looks a little empty. 
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I recommend some more trees in the background and the text in the middle of the screen. Good job so far! 
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