Feedback on Roblox GFX

Hello everyone, I’m a roblox programmer who just started on making GFX…

Btw if you wanna use this thumbnail (which most of you wont because it sucks) you will have to contact me on discord Flameyz#8249

This time I wanted to try out some rendering stuff and hdri, and I would like any feedback/nitpicks/suggestions if possible!

Thanks in advance!

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I’ve never done GFX so this looks pretty good to me, and well, it is good!

What I could suggest you do is maybe work on is how the red light hits the person. It has an outline that’s a bit brighter than other things being hit by the light. It’s giving the person as if it has a neon material on it.

Also, you may want to make it a bit darker, because it just seems too bright for what kind of scene it is.

Otherwise good GFX design!

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Thank you! :smiley: 30 Characters

I think the right topic for this is Art Design Support

Otherwise, this looks nice. The lighting could be a little darker and maybe some more decorations.

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Ok, thank you! :smile: 30 Chars

Art Design Support category is for Art Design related help. Cool Creations is something to show off what you made and ask for feedback.

(This is the right topic)

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Oh ok… cool! :smiley: 30 chars

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No complaints, this is amazing you did a great job!

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The lighting is great! I don’t see any noise on the GFX. Keep up the great work! :+1:

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I love it! I just feel like the torso to the legs looks a little off. Like this photo…

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It feels like the legs are going to detach at some point. :sweat_smile: The back hair color (gray) looks a little awkward to me, too (Unless it was intended!) I haven’t done GFX before, but I really like how the keypad was formed. Great job! :+1:

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Amazing job, you did great on this!

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Thank you really much! :smile:

I don’t know why but the hair is supposed to be black idk why its gray in the back :sweat_smile: Anyways thank you!

Wooohoo Here we go again :smiley: Great Job Sir!

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For Starters, this is really accurate! Keep it up! I’d like to see some more of your GFX in the future! :+1:

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