Feedback on second ever GFX

Hi, I am 4581quzwi I started making gfx art a year ago but dropped it in 2 days I decided to pick up Gfx making again yesterday! Does anyone have any Feedback? I feel like some things are missing but I don’t know what! Thank you!

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It sure does look like your character is floating in the air, feet not touching the ground, maybe one or none., it’s also too bright for me.

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Looks way too bright, too much white and as someone said before, the character isn’t touching the ground at all. Try to make it look darker and add less light coming from the car, as well as little detail here:
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You can see how the colours change unexpectedly, maybe change the material from Neon to Plastic and add small shadows of light on the ground instead of the entire part.

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Thank you Ill go work on thee brightness what colours are too bright?

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Is this better?

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Maybe a little bit more brighter.

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I would recommend using the mesh function on blender to bend the legs, you won’t have those weird leg lumps sticking out. Otherwise, it looks pretty fine. :smiley:

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