Hi!
@ValiantWind commissioned a shop offf of me, and I’m eithin 30 minutes of giving it to the commissioner.
In the last 30 minutes, I wass going to ask whst everybody thinks of it?
I decided to do a cart system for it, and after a lot of extra code it worked.
Let me know what you think, and if you have any suggestions!
Please note I’m on my laptop right now so things might appear smaller as it’s not in a 1920x1080 ratio
eh ui is kinda bad.
Its just a gradient which no offense looks bad. And then the colors dont match, the top is white, while the body colors are black. Choose one.
The style was a request, along with the gradient
its just that the gradient colors of blue and red simply dont match at all. Maybe make the rotation of the gradient 90? rather than side ways
The top color and body colors should also probably match too imo but you do u ig
For some reason I feel like it would look better if you just moved the UI a LITTLE bit higher
The UI isnt that good. Its too choppy aka No tween I like the background but 1 thing that makes me say THIS SUCKS is this
Its not even distance…
this ones not either
doesnt look good with that color
text color is bad.
the one thing that I do LOVE is the background color scheme with the image. I wont be saying Good Job but wont be saying Bad Job either Its a normal UI
What’s the thing “that makes you say This SUCKS”? Is it the stripes?
Ah no nono the stripes are good its in the images I added above.
P.S: I know UI making is hard but to make a UI look good it should be symmetric.
That icon is the gear icon which will be changed by the commissioner
No the icon
the distance! its too big! it should be the same as how it is from the top e.g
Left Dist = 10 p
UpDown Dist = 5p (together)
Up Dist = 2.5p
Left Dist should be == Up Dist
i will say that i’ve never seen a roblox shop with a shopping cart mechanic. very cool
I feel like using the Windows Vista Legacy ‘tada’ sound might make an impression, but not necessarily a good one. I do like the rest of the sounds, and their fluid design, but if there was bass of the clicking sound it should make it better.
Next, the buttons. I don’t really like buttons that don’t have some sort of a vertical gradient, but this one seems fine. It looks so unoriginal that I can’t even tell who made it. The rest of the clickables seem to have that mobile phone design feel.
I like the icons, but for example, the warning icon you got here:
might look better if colored yellow.
Now, to the background. The background is something unique, but it’s hard to tell if you only glance at it. It looks like a filler. I would ditch the background and add a BlurEffect to Lighting instead, and add a smaller background to this section:
Ok, now the theming. I don’t have much to say about this except for the fact that users should be able to choose their own themes, or at least make them themed the same. In this case, it’s not:
They are completely opposite themes.
Now, the design of the whole frame. It looks rather okay, but the edges make it look unoriginal and too curved. Not to mention the edges aren’t consistent, with that top 3-button menu at the top not covering the whole width of the menu. Here’s an image:
I think the top part should be stretched out. I also think that the animations when clicking on it are a bit underwhelming, since the background is lightly colored.
It doesn’t end there. What is this inconsistency?
Anyways, I think the design is rather perfect other than those improvements that could be made.