Feedback on Small Low Poly Cabin

I just made a small low poly cabin to test out my building skills and I think I did pretty good, what do you think? (P.S This took like 10 minutes.)



Please be honest and straight forward because I want to improve my building and learn.
Also if anyone could give me advice on how to build a good building portfolio, I would appreciate it.

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I mean im not a probuilder myself and im lazy to build,for 10 minutes this looks what it should look for that amount of time!

That’s good for 10 minutes of work.
I think it’s good it’s just the color that’s a bit off just my opinion. Otherwise it’s good!

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Looks great! Although this was made in 10 minutes, it looks very well done and there aren’t any noticeable mistakes. I like it!

As others have said, its good for 10 minutes of work.
Personally, would I have changed the position of the white parts on the windows is positioned, looks a bit weird imo.

I really like it, I like the touch of shine on the glass. Pretty good.

Small, short and clean. I like it. Realistically, there are too many windows, house is too small and the glaze comes out too far but otherwise nice.

Since others have covered the good, I’ll give some feedback on what I think could be improved. This will be a bit nit-picky since there isn’t necessarily anything bad about the build.

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Personally, I would work on the spacing between the different elements.
1 - The wedge/triangle shape doesn’t line up with the square shape of the same tan color below, which I think is simply because the darker brown part between the two sections is a bit thicker than its counterparts, as is also seen in:
2 - Varying “beam” width - they aren’t uniform throughout.
3 - Spacing here around the window seems a little random, especially if you compare the space between the window and the wall to its right, to the spacing between the door and the wall to its left. Also, from the screenshots you provided it looks like all three windows are at varying heights off the ground. (but that may just be the angle of the screenshot)
4 - Further examples of odd spacing if you match things to the center line.

Again, just small things. The build overall looks great, especially for just 10 minutes being put into it.

If you want some advice regarding portfolios, you could take a look at some of the top rated ones; they make for good examples to follow.

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Thank you all for your feedback, I appreciate it!

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Very cool, if you wanted to improve it I would suggest adding some texture to the walls or the roof. :+1:

It’s amazing how you can build such detailed low-poly build in a very short time. But the glass window at the side looks a bit odd…

Anyway, great job!