Please be honest and straight forward because I want to improve my building and learn.
Also if anyone could give me advice on how to build a good building portfolio, I would appreciate it.
As others have said, its good for 10 minutes of work.
Personally, would I have changed the position of the white parts on the windows is positioned, looks a bit weird imo.
Since others have covered the good, I’ll give some feedback on what I think could be improved. This will be a bit nit-picky since there isn’t necessarily anything bad about the build.
Personally, I would work on the spacing between the different elements.
1 - The wedge/triangle shape doesn’t line up with the square shape of the same tan color below, which I think is simply because the darker brown part between the two sections is a bit thicker than its counterparts, as is also seen in:
2 - Varying “beam” width - they aren’t uniform throughout.
3 - Spacing here around the window seems a little random, especially if you compare the space between the window and the wall to its right, to the spacing between the door and the wall to its left. Also, from the screenshots you provided it looks like all three windows are at varying heights off the ground. (but that may just be the angle of the screenshot)
4 - Further examples of odd spacing if you match things to the center line.
Again, just small things. The build overall looks great, especially for just 10 minutes being put into it.
If you want some advice regarding portfolios, you could take a look at some of the top rated ones; they make for good examples to follow.