Feedback on some assets


So, I made some low-poly assets for a game, which is supposed to have an “orange” theme to it. Feedback and criticisms are always appreciated.

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The buy and sell stands look exactly the same, make them look different.

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I guess that was on purpose, since my buyer wanted it that way.

Make different variations of trees rather than a pine tree with different colors.
Even though your buyer want it the same way, I think it’ll looks way so much better in different shapes.

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The trees are nice. I would add a person to each stand, increase the spacing between the letters a little bit. Change up the decor in the sell or buy one so they dont look identical.

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Looks good.I like the theme.

Although I think the stand’s walls should be taller and the it be no as wide because right now the stands look a little weird scale wise to me. Also the trees are shorter than the stands. In my opinion the trees should be taller.

Anyway hope these suggestions helped

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I agree with @C0_le. You should make the decor different in the booths and you should probably add an NPC. Also, I think the booths might look better if they were slightly longer and/or slightly thinner. The rest looks great!

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Wow, I didn’t realize that. Thank you for the help!

Correct but the client asked for that.

The developer has obviously made this to suit someone but wants feedback on how it looks not stuff like that.

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He never say anything about a client in a post, so I didn’t know.

I have him feedback on how it looks. I said they both look the same, that’s about how it looks

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Very nice builds! For the stands, the orange/yellow “covering” seems a little oddly placed, even for a low-poly build. I would consider maybe adding something that attaches the poles that hold up the covering to the actual covering, and maybe to make it a little less boring, add a white stripe somewhere within this stand.

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They have a current good looking base to them. I would recommend trying a different brown for the shops. Pastel colors would look good too.

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I could suggest making low poly icons for the shops. Maybe an alternating color for each icon, e.g. having a yellowish icon on the orange(?) shop.

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Pretty simple, but good. Maybe make some different variations of rocks and trees.

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Thank you all so much for your help. I will take note of these feedback! :heart:

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