Feedback on something i made recently

Hi Everyone! So i am making game its obby and actually needed to make lobby i am not good at modeling and at building i am noob

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I like how simplistic this is!

Next time you could change the rendering level to automatic so the textures have more details, the lighting could be better too.

You could add some grass around the map too.

You could also deform the rocks a bit, so it doesnt look like you just copied and scaled those rocks.

This looks really great! I love the cartoony feel you give. If you want to improve on something, make the blocky leaves for some of the trees more blocky. The ones with smooth edged blocks don’t fit well with the rest of the lobby.

Overall I really like the layout but I feel that there is too much empty space especially down in the lower-left corner. Otherwise, this is a great creation!

Its not in the real map because i need to add DOnation wall Difficulty wall so it will fill the map