Feedback on Story game idea

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I just started working on this one story game. I have the story all planned out. It is going to be a comedy/sci-fi/futuristic story even though it might not look the part just now.

I am ofcourse a beginner developer and doing this solely for learning, I do not intend to complete or earn off of it.
I used help from some sources on youtube and devforum to make the basic dialouge system, which I added some tweens to myself.

Please provide feedback!
(I do realise I haven’t provided enough material to actually criticize on, but I’ll post more stuff on this project soon)

it is out for testing (its hardly 2 minutes of gameplay right now)

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I like how it is rn, but not a big fan of the font used

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thanks, I will look for better fonts to suit the theme

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Looks good bro! Awesome! Great idea!

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The music part reminds me of “Click”. I think your idea will be good if you properly advertise.

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Looks great so far!

I like the dialogue system.
My only nitpick is that there no text to see who is speaking.

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ah thanks for that idea. I will add that asap.

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I don’t think that it’s “Basic”. It’s pretty good and advanced looking. Better than just text on the top which many big story games use. Good Job!

Adding after playing the game - Camera effects are really good! The ben 10 intro was also a great touch lol!

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