Feedback on story game?

Hello,

I’m working on a story game where the player is stuck in a facility and tries to escape it. Like an escape room.

Inspired by The Stanley Parable on steam

Some parts of the game seem bland and boring, so any criticism or suggestions would be much appreciated! Also let me know how you feel about the concept and style of the game.

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Impressive! Keep it up, you’ve got a lot of potential with this game.

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It was really cool, I want to see what happens.

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I would LOVE to play this when its finished, its really cool

10/10

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Game cutscene thing is poggers.
Also you didn’t have to put that landmine there-

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Excellent quality. I stepped on a landmine.

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i spent 5 minutes of my life to be:

tricked by a mysterious voice
accidently made my asylum purple
killed by a landmine

it was worth it though fantastic game 10/10 cant wait for it to be finished

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Oh my god that cutscene is SOOOOOOOO cool. I love the customizing too and having to duplicate the bricks yourself to involve the player. Well done!
edit i take it back i just stepped on the mine and I don’t like the concept AT ALL. (joking lol)

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Looks pretty cool! However, something wrong with it (in my opinion) is that the name is demo.rblx. Roblox place files are .rbxl, not .rblx. Other than that, cool game! Keep it up!

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