It looks good, but I think it’s a little bit long. If you speed up the first part where the colored text appears, it would be better. But the design and animation is good!
I like the intro screen but as mentioned, I feel it is a slight bit too long. I would have to go with the other opinions to speed up the first bit of the intro. I believe people would enjoy the loading screen especially with the background music. The background music isn’t too loud or repetitive which could get annoying to some users. Good work on the intro screen and hope all goes well with your studio and future games!
I think it could be a bit shorter, maybe? The music is great, and it’s good animation. I think a problem might be that the text is a bit in-your-face, not to be rude.
I believe this is better than a static loading screen with a bar that fills up.