Feedback on Teaser Trailer for my game

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Hey everyone! I quickly made a teaser trailer for the Chapter 2 of my game. Let me know what you think. I know its low quality. Sorry. Thanks!

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heres some feedback:

try to increase the quality and framerate of the video
make editing fit and sync to the music youre using.
add more gameplay to the teaser, theres barely anything going on.
try to get inspiration from other trailers, (as in editing) yours is kinda off.

ill give it a 6/10

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Needs more gameplay(maybe like 8 to 15 seconds longer).
The quality of the framerate is really bad ngl.(what recording software you using?)
Remove/reduced the cam filter during the gameplay(The filter is distracting)
Make the UI smaller or removing them for the trailer, I can’t see them fully.

Also is the game already out but only chapter 1?

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Ah yes. That is very true! My pc is extremely bad. Can’t help it tbf and yes I noticed my editing was off.just couldn’t put my finger on it. Thanks for stating your feedback!

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Thanks for the feedback! I use OBS but it’s just my trash pc. Yes chapter 1 for the game is already out!

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I won’t expect stellar editing skills or recording software, so I’ll be giving my critiques in general.

There’s too little information for me to see what this game has to offer – the first 2 shots are random screenshots of the map, following with you running towards some sort of ‘factory start’ button. Tell the viewer what they should expect from this game, give us a hint of the premise, even just suspenseful text like “Could you escape?” would be better than nothing.

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Thanks for the feedback! This is just a teaser trailer so I thought I would not show much. However I will improve on all the things you said in the main trailer for the game.

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Chapter 2 is almost ready! Just need to finish off some things and we will be ready for release. Enjoy!

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This teaser trailer looks good! Nice job on it!

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