Hello! I’m currently working on a game called: Objective: Impossible.
I want feedback on the menu I made for it!
robloxapp-20200818-0926008.wmv (161.6 KB)
sorry the quality is bad, its roblox’s built-in recorder.
Thanks, have a nice day!
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Hi looks nice!
But, I want to, well give feedback.
The red text with a red fade between red and black doesn’t looks good or readable.
Maybe try a white for text?
Try making some lines with frames, it will give it a good touch!
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Ok, I will do that!
EDIT: I did that but the text looked kinda out of place and the text isn’t fading, the storymode is darker because it’s un-selectable.
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Hey! I think this looks pretty good. I’d try making the text stand out a bit more from the background. I do like the red-on-red look, maybe add a bit more of the black fade to the background?
Best of luck with your project! Stay creative 
Looks really nice! I feel like there could be changes, in text color and looks a bit tool plain I feel like it could use changes, because as it is right now it is kind of confusing. Other then that I really like the black and red fade in the background good work! 
Looks a little plain overall. Try adding a bit more detail, like make the background have a little animated effects.
Simplistic menus aren’t a bad thing, this just feels slightly bland and boring. It fits the theme of the game you’re trying to make, but it doesn’t exactly make me want to play it.
It’s meant to be simplistic.
I don’t want it to be high-maintenance.
I’m not saying it shouldn’t be simplistic, I just think it looks a little too static. I advise adding some small ambient effects to the background, but that’s just me.
It would also be beneficial to find out how to cover the ROBLOX top-bar.