Hello, thank you for checking out my post! I would like some feedback, on my new game which I’m currently developing. Keep In mind this is only about 10-15% of the map, but I would love some feedback and suggestions!
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That looks amazing! Maybe you could add more plants like flowers or maybe vines on some of the trees.
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I like it a lot with the blocky style keep going with a good work like this : D
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Looks amazing, but I would consider having the low spec community in the back of your head, this doesn’t look like an easy to run game and a significant portion of the community does not own a rig with a dedicated graphics card.
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I like this low poly build, keep up the good work. Also maybe you can add more flowers or something as a decoration i guess. Besides that it looks all nice!
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Hello there.
There isn’t much to improve on this map as it already looks great, visually appealing and has a nice color palette.
The only thing i would suggest adding is another type of trees, because copy pasting the same tree over and over again isn’t really the best choice. So instead of doing that, try adding 1 or 2 other type of trees with the same blocky style to give this a more realistic vibe.
Other than that, this map is absolutely wonderful and i would love to see the progress as it grows bigger and better.
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The town plaza looks good, I might add some large elements in the distance just to give a sense of scale and so the horizon isn’t so boring and to make it feel like it’s physically placed in the world, not just floating in space.
It’s hard to get a feel for the cave, but it seems really spacious. You could add some stalactites or other rocky outcrops to the ceiling to make it a bit more interesting to break up the large flat areas. You can do the same to the walls, or add foliage like vines or mushrooms. There could even be hanging vines from the ceiling to break up the empty space and make it feel a bit more cramped.
The crystals stick out too much, especially because you can see them all at the same time just hanging out on the flat walls. Changing the walls would help. The crystals are cool, but I think they’ll be even cooler if you see them appear around corners and in hidden nooks and crannies, they’ll pop even more.
I would tune down the transparency of the crystals just to get a bit less glow. A trick I often use to make better “crystal” or “transparent glowy plastic” materials is to put the neon part inside a transparent glass or SmoothPlastic that’s slightly larger. You can get effects like this:
Crystal.rbxm (46.6 KB)
I think it looks a lot cooler. You can make it easily by duplicating all the parts with Ctrl+D, then scale them all uniformly by holding shift and using the resize tool.
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This looks amazing but i think you should put some more details into the trees
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I enjoy the style you went for, however the caves need a lot of work.
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wow very cool but i think the menu gui is too blury
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Great low-poly builds! The caves should be a bit darker though.
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The Game Actually runs pretty good and not laggy, I have a few plans If there are some complaints about having lag issues or just in general of the game running poorly, Adding like Low Graphics mode, and things like that.
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Yes I’m currently Planning on making more flowers, and some vines and in general adding more detail to make the game stand out.
Thank you for the feedback means a lot!
Yes, as of currently I’m planning on adding new flowers and different types, I’m also coming up with new ideas that can give detail to the game thanks for the feedback!
Yes you have a great point, As of right now I’m currently thinking of new tree ideas, because you have a good point about have the same 3 trees over and over, thank you for the feedback and suggestion!
There will be tons of land so you will see all the mountains and all the other land marks etc, but thank you for the feedback!
Yes I’m currently taking this into consideration, I’m seeing the lack of details into the trees, I’m currently seeing what I could add as of right now.
Yes, I noticed that too, and I’m planning on re-doing the whole menu to make it look way better than it is currently.
Thank you for the feedback, I’m currently planning on re-doing the came, and make it stand out more, and overall just make it look better than it is currently.
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