Feedback on this game logo

Recently made this game logo for a friend, I don’t usually make game logos but I feel like this is an improvement in design compared to the game logos I made included here.

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Opinions?

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I think this looks great. The gradient in “land” looks nice. However, I would make the word “of” a lighter color. It blends in with the chain and it’s in a dark area of the ship that I didn’t see it right away. I thought the title said “Land Serenity” lol. Other than that, keep it the way it is! It looks nice.

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I liked how you did the first logo and in the second you know what font fits the title and the softness of the color
Good work

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