I made this loop in Logic (No premade loops all made from scratch). How does it sound?
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Sound very good, and soothing to the ears. The fact that it’s made from scratch is impressive. 
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The rhythmic percussion ruins it on the ear, as it seems like it is attempting to protude itself. Only use the rhythmic ones if your songs are rhythm-reliant, although that’s just up to the artist.
So should I delete the drums? How can I fix this?
You could remove the drums or set more rhythmic elements that matches it. It’s up to your choice.
I like it!
The only changes I would make personally is speeding up the attack on the bass part and maybe lowering the volume of it as well. I think you would find the percussion fits much better with that change.
Great job though! 
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