Feedback on this map

Made this map and since im still pretty new to building I want some feedback on how I can improve it or some tips so that I can get better.

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Forgot to add the pics of the map lol


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What is the map used for?

Visually, it’s got vibrant colors which could be good in a cartoony environment, but personally feel over saturated and clash with the realism that the fog provides.

It’s a bit “minus-poly” but generally works!

Gonna be used for a capture the flag game but with guns the crates everywhere is meant to be used for cover and the warehouse on each side will house the flag
Thx for the feedback I’ll try to make the colors less cartoony

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I’d recommending enhancing the cargo containers! Not many people have blender or can experience it but that doesn’t stop you from creating amazing builds! You have amazing studio parts & union properties!

You could use the cylinders part in studio for the locking poles you normally see on a container side (google images for reference)

These are my suggested colors for the poles:

Material —> Metal
Color —> Medium Stone Gray (or Dark Stone Gray)

I would also make the entire container metal! You could even union the sides to give it more details with bumps, or add 0.5 square blocks to replicate it! (May of been tricky to understand but google some picture you’ll see what I mean!)

Other than that I love your build, map & theme you’re going for keep up the good work! Always room for improvement!

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Wait why? Isn’t it free? I thought the only necessity was to have a mouse?

No it’s just need a very good pc so … :slightly_smiling_face:
I hope that was helpful ! :wink:
Have a nice day ! :grin:

What qualifies as a good pc? Cause I never thought i had a very good pc

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A pc new gen at around 1000 € ! :grin:

Mines like six years old and definitely not a new gen. I guess its a miracle it runs blender fairly well then :joy:

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Maybe I’m wrong … :sweat_smile:
(I think I’m wrong)

Idk I think most people just don’t realize that Blender is free to use and honestly pretty easy to make decent models :joy:

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I’ve try and … the result :
Truc


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I think it’s not bad but not good XD