The video has no direction at all, it’s a visual for a clothing collection I’m releasing soon called EMULATOR. I created the rigs with my collaborator who made some outfits and makeups in the video. I animated, shot, and edited this video using Moon Suite and Premiere. I’m still working and editing it, so I would love to hear your feedback to implement more changes.
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I would suggest actually showcasing the clothing a lot more. I can’t tell that this is actually showcasing clothing. Also, what’s up with all those colors? There is just too much stuff going on.
Sorry is this sounded harsh. I didn’t mean to sound like that.
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Hey there! I appreciate your feedback, don’t worry about being firm! There is a lot of stuff going on lol I definitely agree and can’t argue with that! I’m going to see if I can implement more clothing or implement text on there so it seems a little more clear. The goal I have is to give the viewer an adrenaline rush, explosive colors are my thing. 
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Oh okay! That’s perfectly fine with me. Also, I think the animations are a bit too jittery, at 1:00, the avatar looks like it’s shaking. If that’s what you’re going for, I don’t really mind. 
I dig that concept though!
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This video is actual insanity. It’s really cool and groundbreaking, but it really needs a calm epilepsy warning at the beginning. The epilepsy warning is enough to trigger epileptic seizures. Also, please make some male clothing. I see too many female-centric clothing lines on the platform in I would like it if there were some more masculine clothing articles. Thanks for hearing me out.
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YES!!! Thank you for saying that! It is a glitch, the invisible storyline would be of the game coming to an end. There’s a scene I added which isn’t placed in the YouTube video, but hopefully, with titles, it can let the viewer create their own backstory. 
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Thank you for your awesome feedback!
I will make sure I include ‘EPILEPSY WARNING’ in the title of the video, I wanted to ask as well if the dress that’s spinning in the intro is distinguishable. I don’t know if you can tell what it even is? I’m pondering about removing it, and I’m hoping I can hear your second thoughts 
I am making some male clothing! Here’s two of them which have their own “campaign photoshoot”, but it’s not done being edited…
(the person on the right’s face looks jagged, still figuring out how to shape it)
These two are practically unisex, I definitely want and wish there was more male clothing. There’s just a huge barrier when it comes to masculine style. There isn’t much variety until it reaches borderline feminine, but our society is opening its options as time passes on (I think?).
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