Feedback on this residential building I made

So I build this apartment on roblox for a friends only game.

And I need feedback in this

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it is a bit of a mess might want to fix it a little

oh ok, I will take that as something I can improve on

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It’s a little bit too basic, but I mean hey, if this is your first build, good job! :smile:
For details which I’d might want to see is more of matching colors and some-kind of “realistic” lighting if you get what I mean. You can always take a reference
image and try to re-create that!

Otherwise, good job! :slightly_smiling_face:

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Thanks for your feedback, I will try doing some more matching colours to this

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its excellent for your first build the interior is good the exterior seems a little sloppy but i hope to see your next builds to see how you have improved

You should consider adding some more details on the outside and maybe if you have the time, might aswell put some more details in the interior. Although I like this kind of building style. It looks decent to me. It also gives this vibe of a classic building. It looks simple but good. Although I’m not a builder myself, to me it looks decent.

Thanks for that feedback. At the moment its on a building place and this will move to a town game im making at the moment

Thats why there was no detail on the outside, if thats what your saying about the outside

I think its too basic and it need more detail

Yes, Now I think it is too basic. But thanks for your feedback :slight_smile:

The colors on some floors seem a bit bright, like the yellow and green carpet. I would definitely play with the lighting a bit, and I agree with it seeming basic.

I will try playing with the lights and make the floors a bit darker in walls and floors

Very simple and blocky, but its a great first start

Good Job! Nice first Creation, Although it could use some better color correlation. Other than That I’d say its preety nice!