Feedback on this showcase I'm currently working on

I was thinking of making it a challenge to make a showcase that looks really good. I called the Town Of Memories, where it’ll be like an abandoned city, which got rotten, got plants grown through it,etc.

Here’s a sneak peek of it:-
Showcase Preview

Ik it doesn’t have that much detail on it, but don’t worry everything will turn out to be very different from what you see in the picture.

Can I have your feedback on the builds all of it so far(Those papers on the ground and the garbages are the only free models around the map, the rest is my build, its seriously a solo building challenge)

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NGL but it looks like you only used free models for everything. Those buildings look like the ones phoqus made in the toolbox. They just look too similar to it that I can’t tell if you made it yourself or just inserted it into your game and thought no one would know. If this is your own build then my apologies, but they just look to similar.

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That’s ok @DancingCow505, I got your point. At first, when I was getting started building the showcase, I was trying to get the basic idea of how it looks like for a simple brick building, I do agree your point.

Don’t worry, I will NGL to yea, this is legit mine, although its similar

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Ok then, I will take your word for it. I had the problem of only using free models for building games when I first started out, but now I can build on my own. Good luck with the rest of your build!

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it is pretty empty you should add like a playground or something and why is that trashcan so tall?

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Ehh, it looks pretty empty.
It’s just 2 buildings, a road, and what looks like free model garbage stuff :/.

That looks nice, but add some future lighting and add like a street lamp.

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@Snack_Tack @TheChasingBoy @ArtemAgent0707 I know what you guys might be thinking, yes its empty like I said, this is just the start, like the topic

Btw, @ArtemAgent0707, thanks for the tip, I can make a model of a street lamp

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Oh lol sorry I normally will skip to heads, saying “finished” unless specifically stated.

I’d only post to ask for feedback if you don’t know what to do or if it’s finished though.

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Which lighting type would you prefer and why?

Just asking and curious a bit to know…

Future lighting, because it’s much realistic and makes the shadows better.

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Hmm a playground…, I haven’t made a complicated model like a playground, since I use Roblox Studio to even make model of my own, welp seems to worth of a try then

Thanks for recommending it, mate!

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