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So i was making a game called “Random flying game” and I made a thumbnail and i wanted some feedback on it what should i do with it or stuff

Here it is

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Edit or this?

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Thumbnail 2

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Looks pretty good!

I only have a couple suggestions.

  1. The text is a bit dark and hard to read. I suggest changing the color to a brighter one to make it more readable and to fit the sky color a bit more.

  2. The character (I don’t play FNAF so I don’t know what his name is) is kind of dark compared to the sky, I think you should make him lighter.

  3. There is a random black spot that you may need to fix.
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I hope my feedback was helpful! :grinning:

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It is helpful! btw his name is Freddy and that black thing is a hat

Edit: here’s what I tried

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I like it! I suggest adding a different background for the last two thumbnails.

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